Wednesday, 14 September 2016


what ?
IALT: improve my  swimming skills.
in the last two weeks the year 6/5 went to star fish to swim 

So What 

i learned how to do a proper dive

                                            Now What
                                      i wont to learn how to do briststrok legs

Tuesday, 17 May 2016

This week I am reflecting on one of my writing goals

IALT: Improve my writing by learning how to:

* use a variety of sentence starters

This week I have been focusing on how to write a drop-in clause

Here is an example of a drop-in clause

Mr Forman is our teacher.
He loves his red car.
Mr Forman, who is our teacher, loves his red car.

Mr Forman is the subject of the sentence.
We change ‘He’ to ‘who’
We place commas around the clause we ‘drop-in’

Here are two examples of a drop-in clause that I have created.
[1]Mrs Mcloud who was wearing a nappy was eating her dinner.
[2]The dinosaur who was singing barbie girl was chasing the boy.

I rate my understanding level at 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
My confidence level with using these types of sentences independently in my writing is
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Tuesday, 10 May 2016

My Writing Goals for term 2

IALT: Improve my writing by learning how to

*organise my writing into paragraphs.

* use a variety of sentence starters.

* use the correct language features of a narrative dialogue.

Use a variety of sentence starters.

To help me with this goal i am using a 'sentence starter Menu'

It will help my writing to be more interesting and to hook the reader in more.

Thursday, 14 April 2016


We have been leaning about what our body needs to stay healthy and happy. As part of this the Life Education truck came to school.


* There are many different names for sugar.
* that if you eat to much sugar you can get diabeties .
* I thought that fruit bars were made out of 100% fruit because that's what it said on the packet but actually there is lots of sugar but in different names.


I am going to start to look out for what I am eating and try to keep under 10 grams of sugar per 100gm serving because over that  isn't very heathy for you.

Thursday, 25 February 2016

leah henna

This week is multi cultural week and Dania's mother came in and did henna for everyone.

Tuesday, 15 December 2015

My Final 2015 Blog

The funniest thing that happened this year was year 5 camp 
The highlights of this year are swimming, passion project, SDL, and basketball.

Wednesday, 9 December 2015

My Student Led Conference

                 My Student Led Conference

I felt my student led conference went because I spoke clearly. 
My favourite part of my SLC was sharing my writing. 
This year I am feel I am proudest of my writing because I am using good sentence starters.
My learning goal for 2016 is using more sentence starters.